It was two weeks before Christmas, and my mom and I decided to go Christmas shopping at Sa-lar-ver Mall. As we entered the mall I was taken a back to see the stores bursting at the meams with people, each person is looking for a special gift for a special someone. The sound of Christmas carols along with the beautifully decorated Christmas Tree and the brightly lit lights med the come alive.
very good paragraph. i must say
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